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this is why women don't command armies lmao
This.You're certainly not wrong.
In the context of the manga though she was warned the MC and his stars are too much of an unknown, lack of intel costs wars too.
The annoying thing is I can see where a better author could have made this work. They said in earlier chapters that they are in devastating war with the demons and she only invaded the island kingdom in desperation for both a base to attack the enemy flank and the major need for raw resources.This.
Lack of boldness might cost you the war.
Lack of intel will cost you the war.
Actually, since this dumbass decided to invest all her forces into this Endeavor, this would be the perfect time for the demon army to.....suddenly attack.
Meh, I'm so use to writing that could be better it's become more of an "Laugh at this stupidity" rather than a "get angry at the stupidity" thing. And I totally understand, something that reads well when you first write something ends up being bad after you reread what you wrote. This is literally the reason editors exist but if your editor is more interested in you getting the product out than you making a good product, they are going to over look stuff they should have mentioned to their author.The annoying thing is I can see where a better author could have made this work. They said in earlier chapters that they are in devastating war with the demons and she only invaded the island kingdom in desperation for both a base to attack the enemy flank and the major need for raw resources.
Instead they should have made her competent but desperate. Feeling that if she doesn't do something they will be unable to stand against the demons so she is willing to take more risky moves than she usually does cause she sees no other choice. Even just a few lines from the butler telling her to calm down and think it through that she is letting her fear override her normal decision making.
Ill still give this a read cause I have a guilty pleasure for trashy isekai but still annoying when I can see the better way this could be written.
Demon: wut? We have war? I thought we playing gameI give about 65% odds the demon army isn't even "at war" with them in the first place