That's an improvement.
Still a few qualms though. In that grey bubble on page 4 (page 3 not counting the credit page) I strongly recommend the use of the clone tool, or the equivalent in whatever software you use. Just painting over it in solid grey makes it stand out and is ugly. Using clone to deal with patterns, screentone, and textures is one of the fundamental tools in a cleaner's arsenal.
There were also some bubbles that seemed off-centre.
I haven't seen the raws for the chapter, so I don't know if there was a difference in the Japanese, but Chi's sleeptalking is the kind of thing you'd want to consider using a different font from regular dialogue for.
In any event, those huge Korean watermarks always kill my enjoyment of a chapter, regardless of the typesetting.