@Ceppler
This came out well,Good Job and Thanks for the chapter.
One free advice though, Whenever you use Capital 'L' and 'I' next to each other pay extra attention to the font.I read FLIRT in Page 3 as FURT.Still not as bad as an ad agency which approved and ran "DOES YOUR MONITOR FLICKER?" with a bad font in a full page ad in the paper a long time back