Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou ~Yuusha to Koibito ni Tsuihou sareta Senshi no Mujikaku zama~ - Ch. 30

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Thank u always for ur great work...
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His "technique" r top notch...
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I like that they're all wearing something different. It's nice.

Having that kind of pride is for people who seek approval of others.

Who cares about some test for warriors, tasty omelette is about to be had!

Yeah, they look like they don't have the braincells to recognise real power.

Morons trying to defend someone as if they're the arbitrator of who gets to be close to her. Yeah, not too many braincells there.

"Stop treating me like a kid!"
Stop acting like one.

Dumb competition. Although with the additional offers, it's worth it.

This is why, "Ladies first," doesn't apply going up ladders.

If she's worried about people looking, wear some clothes.

"Why are you mad?"
She's a bit touched.

That is the most ridiculous attempt at a censor ever lmfao. Straight up black box
Oh, I've seen worse. Imagine the same, but half the panel is black-boxed so you can't even see what it's supposed to be hiding. And it would've censored her outfit entirely.

Kind of funny how they censored everything except the first panel that still showed a pretty detailed shot.
Probably because there was no action going on.
 
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Thanks for the update also bro really stole rawkuma's code without the actual functionality of copy and paste
 
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That preview... "something is rising and it's not my level"
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She wasn't even trying to grab back on to the wall with either hands or feet and stayed on his face till she "finished". Essentially she forcefully face-f'd him and then got mad at him and hit him? It's definitely played as a joke, but that still doesn't sit well with me.
Yes she is too clumsy for normal flirting that is why she instead gave him a facefull of her pussy accidentally.

I guess lil'bro just got introduced to get ntr'd lol. Looking for that spicy next chapter tho.
oh, wow, I haven't seen that in porn for awhile-oh she's just sitting on him...
bro sure ate good
Geezus, those were some thicc black boxes...
They just completely skipped using the pointlessly thin black bar censors.


T: What are you doing?!
A: Um.
T: Why are you taking so long?
A: I'm... I'm almost up! [You're still on Toru's face, and then some...]
At first, I wasn't sure who said, "I can't hold on any longer!", between Alyusha's vagina or Toru(the huge black box didn't help), but seeing the following orgasm on page 19, I'm positive it's the former.
His "technique" r top notch...
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This is why, "Ladies first," doesn't apply going up ladders.

If she's worried about people looking, wear some clothes.
Page 16-19 absolutely pointless, just to 'pad numbers'.
Along with wimpy MC (aka forgiving doormat) this trope is stupidest. Why are you acting as its his fault? It's not like he Yuki Rito who literally bend reality to ended up in this situations. It entirely on you. You and your stupid carelessness...
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can the typesetter please understand that you can't just hyphenate English words randomly? you need to put the breaks at syllable boundaries otherwise you get stuff like
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cattered
which makes literally no sense to an English speaker.
 
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For now, I'll still express my gratitude for this chapter and the previous--I do love this series, and I'm glad it's being scanlated. However, the mistakes made are as others in this topic have said. Gashadokai, you've gotta find a proofreader.



Toru has best girl Kaede and second-best girl Marianne; I thought that this Alyusha girl was alright, but that nonsense she pulled--smacking Toru in the face after willfully sitting on it to her climax--makes her amount to the kind of brainless tsundere a man really could and should do without.
 
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My face would look like that too MC, if a massive black censor box hit me in the face.
 
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I despise censorship. It really ruins everything. Instantly the story is no longer as interesting.
Well I came to comment the moment the box showed up so I suppose that's plenty of proof how damaging it is to the flow.
 

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