Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou ~Yuusha to Koibito ni Tsuihou Sareta Senshi no Mujikaku Zamaa~

[Ketarii]

Ahhh. The finest slop you have on the menu sir!
Waiter! Waiter! More slop please!

 

[VirginFemaleLover]

Series lured people in, I was thinking it was gonna be full of sex and adventures 30 chapters in and the mc still a virgin despite being cucked in the literal first chapter. It's just power fantasy trash that used ntr to bait people into reading. If you were gonna do power fantasy trash at least have some sex to go with it. 2/10

 

[adsasdferewrfewrfewr]

where's the s*x?? im a g*mer I need my fuel... goddamn son... god damnn...

 

[Tunim]

Se tem tradução português então tem BR, como tem BR eu posso comentar em português.
Não é uma obra ruim, só é mais uma desse Tema, porém oque mais emcomoda é como as coisas são muito convenientes.

 

[MarcioGui]

Se tem tradução português então tem BR, como tem BR eu posso comentar em português.
Não é uma obra ruim, só é mais uma desse Tema, porém oque mais emcomoda é como as coisas são muito convenientes.

Como assim convenientes? Não entendi. O cara sofreu pra caramba, agora a sorte tá a favor dele. Tem que aproveitar..kkkkk

 

[KingHarkin1an]

Garbage

 

[CrusherKind]

Ok, if the mc was human, with the recent chapter, he wouldn't think what he saw between the prince and noble girl was adorable, anyone with any emotion would think back to their ex-FIANCE and be depressed. Like that's not something you can get over like that after being together for so long to get cucked hard. I had hoped for this series because it was pretty interesting in the beginning and I was hoping for something with the mc and the fox girl (or literally any girl at this point), but only seeing scene with just the villain, basically cuck scenes since what I'm getting at so far is that all the girls the antagonist brainwashed liked the mc originally, and him not getting or doing anything is honestly tiring at this point. Especially with the mc being fine with it all and acting like nothing happened throughout all the chapters so far. This is basically someone's NTR fetish combined with Rising of the Shield Hero but making him supper OP. If your gonna make the mc that overpowered and not that depressed or looking back at his past relationship, then add some romance, sex scenes, or literally anything with him. People who read this stuff typically like to see themselves as the mc or root for his success when they're that overpowered and cheery, so adding NTR stuff without anything to give to the mc is just stupid. I can add more, but I'll stop here. Honestly man I was hoping for more with this but I'm done at this point. Wish you the best with this project, but I ain't read any more of this sh*t. Maybe when I come back in a few years there might be a kissing scene with the mc, but knowing this author, there will at least be 10 sex scenes with the antagonist and the women he cucked the mc with before that happens.

 

[CrusherKind]

This is an impressive level of zero-effort slop with every aspect stolen from other slop. slopception

-MC unfairly ejected from hero party by overtly evil "hero" leader
-betrayal by longtime female partner/love interest/etc
-immediately given absurd power
-buys little girl slave instantly
-stumbles into perfectly fortunate events that they're perfectly suited for on a daily basis

the list goes on and I'm sure only gets worse as the series continues

don't foregut the mc not getting or not wanting to do anything romantic or sexual with any woman!

 

[monkey123]

The fake hero will probably fuck MC's harem before MC gets his donger going? I guess drop it is.

 

[elia_zz]

Trash, Mc is still a virgin despite being cucked at the start, all his bitches got stolen from him and when he finally has bitches again he doesn’t make them him his, author do you know the concept of learning from mistakes? Why can’t you make MC see that if he wants to protect them then they can’t be PURE ANYMORE they have to be his and his alone but you make the mc the generic brown hair cuck who blushes and stutters like a school girl but has plot armour so women flock to him, it’s always the same bit it’s even worse cuz you made sex scenes with them being fucked but never one including Mc expert for a tiny blowjob, author get your priorities straight you fucking clown

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

Trash, Mc is still a virgin despite being cucked at the start, all his bitches got stolen from him and when he finally has bitches again he doesn’t make them him his, author do you know the concept of learning from mistakes? Why can’t you make MC see that if he wants to protect them then they can’t be PURE ANYMORE they have to be his and his alone but you make the mc the generic brown hair cuck who blushes and stutters like a school girl but has plot armour so women flock to him, it’s always the same bit it’s even worse cuz you made sex scenes with them being fucked but never one including Mc expert for a tiny blowjob, author get your priorities straight you fucking clown

Rest assured that, once he gets a few key pieces of information he currently lacks, the root of his trauma causing him to put up a wall against romance and sex will begin to crumble.

 

[Gitzdeep]

So we have "weak" MC, that got NTRed by his teammate, which is the rage right now, then we have him buying a beast girl that may or may not turn older later, because he can't trust normal people, which is lift straight up from shield hero.

Not a single original bone in this fucking manga.

Don't forget the ever pathetic absolutely necessary trope for the self inserting bottom feeding perma-virgins aka mc's balls instantly suck up back into ovaries as the mc transforms into some pathetic ball-less king of betas anytime something even remotely seductive happens. The most ridiculous loser trope ever and this manga beats that trope to dust and mush. It's bad enough watching a bad ass adventurer instantly become some ball-less joke of a man the instant he so much as sees panties... yea the girl doesn't even need to be nude it's that sad.

 

[Gitzdeep]

Rest assured that, once he gets a few key pieces of information he currently lacks, the root of his trauma causing him to put up a wall against romance and sex will begin to crumble.

He is a japanese based character i hightly doubt that he will be just like the insane # of lifetime virgin losers in japan and rot of old old AF age stick rockin that vcard the ever pathetic non aggresive simp joke of man just as intended so the artist can relate and pander to his fellow sad sack eternal virgin rejects.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

He is a japanese based character i hightly doubt that he will be just like the insane # of lifetime virgin losers in japan and rot of old old AF age stick rockin that vcard the ever pathetic non aggresive simp joke of man just as intended so the artist can relate and pander to his fellow sad sack eternal virgin rejects.

Let me assure you my comment was not speculative.

 

[Dertip]

MC glowed up just to get cucked and be the biggest virgin saint after 32 chapters, at this point he should've evolved into a femboy with an ass of a BBL demon hell remove the big cl*t between his leg and replace it with a clam

 

[SweatyPawms]

I'm kinda of on the fence about this story. MC has become aware that his party was manipulated by the other guy into loving him and kicking MC out of the party but it seems like he doesn't care about "saving" the other two he's just off having his own adventure now

 

[Zukoff]

Ooph that notice at the opening of chapter 33 p,.,q

It's one thing to get excited, but keep in your pants gentlemen ~,.,~

 

[LexiTV]

Overall it's a very pathetic story. MC gets "betrayed" by his lover and 2 childhood friends who choose his male childhood friend over him.

Spoiler: Spoiler

Turns out he can brainwash them. From this point on you constantly see their party "suffer" by minor inconveniences and the guy gets jealous. Never mind the casual rape and that the author essentially broke the three female characters for comedic reasons. Also there is no real Karma whatsoever. Garbage Cuck Japanese mentality.

 

[Espoiremenos]

Overall it's a very pathetic story. MC gets "betrayed" by his lover and 2 childhood friends who choose his male childhood friend over him.

Spoiler: Spoiler

Turns out he can brainwash them. From this point on you constantly see their party "suffer" by minor inconveniences and the guy gets jealous. Never mind the casual rape and that the author essentially broke the three female characters for comedic reasons. Also there is no real Karma whatsoever. Garbage Cuck Japanese mentality.

yeah i read each chapter for see a revenge but the anthagonist litteraly live his best life :/ wtf uor prota know now they are brainwash go save them '-'

 

[Camul]

This one is disgusting but not surprising author get your head checked. Kidding off course but ntr and brainwashing stuff is so boring now and this has both tbh if I immediately hit lvl 300 in his case I would've gone back and killed that asswipe immediately much better start.