Kekkon Yubiwa Monogatari

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People dont seem to notice that none of the characters choose their position.

Sato didnt choose to be the ring king. But it was the only way to get to Kristal.

Kristal loved Sato, but felt conflict with his situation as the ring king.

The rest of the wives just followed their duty. But had their own expectations, as Sato was their husband too.

Even Mars was in conflict over abandoning his responsability to Sato, as he was abandoning his own love for Saphir.

I have to admit, that after Kristal and Sato relationship formalizes... its really frustrating to see the rest of the girls around.

I mean Saphira and Sato relationship was really awful most of the time. Sato really just treats her worse than the rest.

Meanwhile the rest were kinda just waiting for something to happen, i mean, Garnat expected him to be his husband and Amber is on a mission to restore their entire especies.

So when there was nothing there it was frustrating, cause of course Sato wouldnt do anything. He is with the one that he loves.

But the rest didnt really choose Sato either.
 
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I mean Saphira and Sato relationship was really awful most of the time. Sato really just treats her worse than the rest.
The two treated each other quite weirdly, it seem like author's wanted for them to be more friend than lover but messed it up.
 
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The two treated each other quite weirdly, it seem like author's wanted for them to be more friend than lover but messed it up.
I get that, but i didnt feel like they even were really friends.

Like that time the elven elder lock them up in the sex room. There was an attempt of Saphira to talk and he just "kindly" told her he wasnt interested in her.
 
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I get that, but i didnt feel like they even were really friends.

Like that time the elven elder lock them up in the sex room. There was an attempt of Saphira to talk and he just "kindly" told her he wasnt interested in her.
There are also many time when she herself did the same thing.
It look like the author wanted the two of them to be friend that pick fight with each other but are still close, sadly he mostly failed.
 
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For an 86 chapter long harem, that was way too much time spent sorting out the very first girl, who already liked him and was liked back from the start, all so it'd have to be sorted out yet again later on. And then again.
Overall, the ending is more rewarding than a sudden "and they lived happily ever after" but ends up being a lot more rushed in return.
 
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Started reading because of the childhood friend main character.
Then learned it was a harem, but okay, there were reassurances that the childhood friend would stay number 1.
After I think the fourth time Sauto and Hime were in bed, she was totally dtf, and Sauto pussied out, I dropped.

I'm not saying you need to draw porn, you can just fade out and heavily imply that they banged. That's fine.
Or, if you can't have them actually have sex for whatever stupid publishing reason (like age ratings), then just don't bring it up or endlessly drag on Hime's anxiety of wanting to be the first one to have sex with him.
But don't waste my time and shove them in a bed together four times, only for nothing to ever happen. It's annoying.

I honestly would have liked this manga better if all those bed scenes were cut. No teasing, no issue, he still gets to kiss his cute childhood friend to get powered up by the rings.
 
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It's quite instresting to see that shitty story with no plot nor romance, that have the MC of a harem fuck all girl the moment they meet, never have any complain about the total lack of relationship developpement, but when an author take the time to developpe and explain why the character dont fuck like rabbit people complain.

People are complaining that in this story the MC dont fuck the girl out of obligation because he dont want to force them, because he want them to live their life freely after they complet their quest...
The entire plot around their relationship and the ring's power is "superficial relationship are dangerous", but people beg for superficial relationship...

People also act as if MC acted like all the basic RomCom, refusing to get even close to the girl for year, but the entire story is only a few month long... That's realy short for everything's that happened to them.

I'll never understand people... Well, when i see the trash, that dont have any plot and are made like super low quality porn, having the best rating on this website i understand why social media are such cesspool.
All you really said was that the people who read porn don't critically analyze the plot and character development, while people who read a manga that tries to tell a serious story will actually engage, and point out things they don't like.
 

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