"A man in his 20s"
So the guy that being dismembered is the first panel is in his 20s.
The guy who tired to shame Ryuto is his college mate.... in his 20s......
WELL FUCK
@Turkeyjerkey? The description has no flaw in language or fluency at all, it's obvious that the description is intentionally vague which is annoying. It says "description" however that's not a description at all, a description makes a short summary describing a story, not a fucking teaser
@Jeriel
You'll notice a running theme if you read through the rest of the comments. Why don't you use that brain of yours and try to imagine why everyone was commenting that the description was a total mess?