Kimi ga Shinu Made Ato 100 Nichi - Ch. 28 - I'll Forgive You

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Aww but Tarou just tearing up internally pleading not to lose her ;w;
 
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Honestly I think that Umi will either commit suicide due to some internal pressure that she is putting on herself and not expressing or she will kill someone. I think Umi is silently a crazy person.
 
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@Tanazanite Two suggestions:

恋人じゃなくてもただの幼なじみでもいいから。

The way the current translation is worded makes it seem like he's neither her boyfriend nor her osananajimi/childhood friend.

[ul]
[li]Even if I'm not her boyfriend,/ even if I'm just a childhood friend. (parallel structure and repetition to get his desperation across) or[/li]
[li]I don't care if I'm not her boyfriend.../ ...and just a childhood friend. or[/li]
[li]Even if I'm not her boyfriend.../...and just a childhood friend.[/li]
[/ul]

I'm doting on you too less, rather.

I'd say/think/etc I'm doting on you way too little. (Mirrors Umi's line about being doted on too much.)
 
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@justforthelulz - Just because the same flag was raised in two chapters back to back? Any he further vows to do anything, no matter what?

I'm sure that's fine.
 
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You are my sunshine, my only sunshine
You make me happy when skies are grey
You'll never know dear how much I love you
Please don't take my sunshine away

You could have just put a chapter of crying puppies in here and it would have carried the same message across, really.
 

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