Koi, Irodorumade - Ch. 24

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Wait, why the Yellow is shown ? I'm pretty sure Aki's color is red tho. Also 3 chapters and Reine still can see only blue. We wiil had to wrap up the 2 color in 3 chapters which is quite the rush.I hope this little blonde brat have suffer because she seem really irritating as a human being. In the end, i don't know if it's axed, rushed or just the author sucking at made a story but thestory is way too short for what it can have been.
 
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i don't know if it's axed, rushed or just the author sucking at made a story
The second and third are definitely true, and the first is highly plausible. Complementing the lousy storytelling is the pidgin into which it has been translated.
 
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@Oeconomist I'm a bit sad, it had such a great potentiel with this plot but ended up getting wasted for god know why.
 
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hmmm...This is nearing a end?
Damn...This should have at least more 20 chapters to explain things and others colors show up
 
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The essential elements of the set-up were intriguing, but the author probably never had much of a plot constructed. A lot of authors start writing before they have anything more that what they regard as a great beginning; in this case, it seems that he or she began publishing on the web before he or she had more than that beginning. The slow-walking of the story was probably an artefact of not knowing where to go.
 
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@Lilliwyt Yeh :< I saw potential in it too... moi sad :< However I will say the ending did tug at my heart strings even though the final journey to the ending was a bit mmm... you know xD
 

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