Gotta be honest, I opened both this and the sniper's chapter and read each page back and forth. It's pretty much 50/50, half of the translations in your version are better/feel better and half of their translations are better/feel better.
The only thing you actually have up on the sniper, who is putting content out faster than you, is quality but the quality of his stuff isn't awful, it's not amazing. However, it isn't the worst I've seen by a long shot. I'm here for the story and having to wait forever for a less de-saturated translation that is equally translated, just different bits are better or worse, isn't worth it.
If the sniper randomly drops it, I'll be waiting for you to catch up if you haven't dropped it as well. Though your version will be better after it is all said and done.
This translation is the one I will recommend to anyone who hasn't read this manga yet for sure though.