Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata - Ch. 90.5

[MangaDex]

 

[MeetTheWooV2]

1. Good luck, new TL bro
2. badussy aroma all up in the sofa

 

[UnvalidUserName]

Easiest way to make him say it, is to make him ask for it

 

[Bornsinner]

Thanks for picking this one up!

He'll say the forbidden word eventually.

 

[Hikari-tan]

Thank you for picking this series up! I actually made this account to start uploading my own scanlation if no one else did, but it looks like you’re already ahead of me. Let me know if there’s any way to help!

 

[KitRagnell]

Let's goooooooo

 

[Darklight99]

Can he say, "Anal sex"?

 

[ironhant]

Can he say, "Anal sex"?

we havent had the onsen arc yet so maybe not yet

 

[0ri]

hope she'll get over her incel brainworms soon

 

[THEWildBoon]

New translator came really fast thank you!!!

 

[Cosmism]

Not to be nitpicky over the TL, for which I am grateful, but the use of the term 'chosen one' is strange and abstruse. Would it make sense to use 'normie' instead?

Though I understand that it's also not a perfect analogue, it is readily comprehensible.

 

[BlazingObsidian]

Not to be nitpicky over the TL, for which I am grateful, but the use of the term 'chosen one' is strange and abstruse. Would it make sense to use 'normie' instead?

Though I understand that it's also not a perfect analogue, it is readily comprehensible.

Thanks for your feedback, but Hiura in the original dialogue is being very overdramatic when he uses the phrase that literally does mean "chosen one". I think changing it to something else there would've also altered the tone of the original dialogue

 

[moblinsecret]

I think the line in the second panel on page 2 should be more like "why is it that you say "chuu" when you talk about kisses" instead?

 

[Hardik_7547]

Thanks for picking this up for translations.

 

[EDLJ]

Gex

 

[Cosmism]

Thanks for your feedback, but Hiura in the original dialogue is being very overdramatic when he uses the phrase that literally does mean "chosen one". I think changing it to something else there would've also altered the tone of the original dialogue

Fair. At least you put it in quotes, so it should have been obvious that it's Hiura's idiosyncraticies speaking. Still, I think 'hero/heroine' or 'protagonist' would also make sense. Anyway, it was probably the best call on your part.

 

[mdwnettleton]

hope she'll get over her incel brainworms soon

He's very feminine, but it's still a relatively important part of his character that he doesn't (currently) consider himself trans.

 

[geal]

WHERE IS IT?

WHERE IS IT??

DANG YOU AUTHOR

YOU MADE THEM KISS OFF SCREEN?!

AAAAARGGHHHH

HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO FAP IF YOU DON'T SHOW IT TO US!

 

[erellisae]

Thanks for the TL. I think your style flows better than the previous translator, at least from this half-chapter - it feels looser and less wooden and I appreciate that! If I'm gonna critique anything maybe watch out for it being a bit too loose like when Midou says 'bout' on page 1 it feels kinda off, or the next panel feels a bit better to me if it's 'as if an introvert like me could do that!!' rather than 'as if I could', which feels like it's been cut short.

 

[CaptainK48000]

CUUUUUUTE