Kokou na Kanojo to, Kanojo no Heya de Shiteru koto - Ch. 2

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I thought it was good effort: legible, intelligible, non-distracting. However there were quite a few typos, and the line spacing on the first page was kind of extreme.
 
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Finally, senpai (the 2nd heroine) makes her appearance, even though the pacing feels a bit rushed compared to Volume 1 of the Light Novel. There's no real romantic development with her yet either, since the story is still heavily focused on Kotori as the main heroine.

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★ Takumi gets summoned by Kotori. Her friends told her to try a new perfume tomorrow, so she wants some confidence to wear it at school, meaning she asks Takumi to help with the "routine" (Segs). Afterward, still lacking confidence, Kotori asks if Takumi is unsatisfied since it felt different this time. Takumi instinctively shows her the used condom to prove that the amount he released is exactly the same as always, just so she won't feel sad. He finally comes clean and admits he was just distracted thinking about something else. He tells her about bumping into Akira at school, a senpai he can actually talk to normally. Kotori offers to help him find out more about this senior. Not forgetting the whole point of today's routine, she puts on her new perfume and asks Takumi to smell it. Even though they literally just did something way more shameless, having Takumi lean in close to smell her makes Kotori blush way harder.

★ Kotori calls for Takumi again, but this time without sending her usual cat stamp text, which is their secret code for Segs. Today, she just wants his advice because her first classroom cleaning duty in high school is coming up. The duty is done in pairs between a guy and a girl. Her partner is Toba, a popular guy from the cool clique. Back in middle school, Kotori always got stuck doing all the chores alone, so this time, she really wants to do it properly with someone else. She makes it her goal to at least say hi to Toba before their shift so they can communicate smoothly later.

thank you for translation
 
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Finally, thanks for the translation! 👍🏻😎 But man, the mentality of the people in this class is so annoying. The MC doesn’t do anything wrong—just because he has a serious face and a strong, athletic build (he’s a former athlete), they treat him like some kind of terrifying monster. It would be great if takumi just beat the hell out of every single one of them; then they’d actually have a reason to be afraid.
 
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Thank you all for the feedback so far, I'll try my best (and sod too) to improve. Also, so sorry for the missing text boxes on page 16, I accidentally posted the wrong pages </3. It is fixed now tho
 
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It's probably a long shot, but I'd like to see Takumi build a healthier connection with Akira instead of this tangled situation he has with Kotori. Right now, his dynamic with her is worse than friends with benefits. At least in those arrangements, both parties hook up and move on with their lives. Takumi and Kotori are childhood friends with years of shared history and memories between them. Their relationship is much more meaningful and the fallout from a potential strife would be damaging to say the least.

The problem is that sex has become a cornerstone of their relationship, serving as validation for Kotori's femininity and a source of confidence she depends on. That strikes me as precarious territory. Their bond could easily unravel if circumstances shift. For instance, if Takumi ever tried to redefine boundaries, it could leave her feeling worthless rather than supported. There is real risk here that the foundation of who they are together gets eroded by dependency.

Thanks for the translation!
 
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i dont understand the direction of this series

its like a hentai plot, but they are not going to show seggs etc, so what's the point then?
 

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