Konbini de Deatta Eroi Onnanoko to Tadare Kitta Kankei ni Narimashita - Ch. 2 - Going home with someone

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I met a girl at the konbini
I like her and I know she like me
I grab her ass and she touch my peepee
And now she comin home with me
Ya she the girl at the konbini
 
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I was kind of hoping it would keep blue balling us in more and more ludicrous ways, for example:

"Ugh, we want to bone quickly, but there's roadworks on the direct path home, so we have to take a side route through the park"
"Ugh, we're so horny, but the local park has become a jungle because of lack of upkeep and we've gotten kind of lost"
"Ugh, we want to fffff-, but we forgot that they bred and reintroduced dinosaurs, and the park is their habitat... one of us has been taken!"
"Ugh, I've got the worst blue balls, but I've got to save this girl from a dinosaur!"
"Ugh, We've both made it out of that park (jungle) alright, and are at my front door... But ALIENS suddenly appeared and have abducted us!"

"Ugh, we've made it back to earth, but my blueballs levels are about to go critical! I think I'm about to EXPLODE!!"

Granted, it gave me no reason to think it'd string us along like that, I guess I just hoped it would for the laughs. :dogkek:
You could argue most romances do this in some form, but shhhh.
i would read that

It helps when the story has time to dedicate the buildup of the chemistry, sexual tension and foreplay between two confident leads.
in the wise words of Houshou Marine, "Start the action within 2 pages, damnit! Stop dawdling around!"
 
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