... I actually found the mall chapter pretty funny, so I don't really get why people would get angry over that one. Oh well. The author didn't react well anyway.
Didnt the sister go to the dad at the start to help take care of her and he drove her out?
Now hes suddenly a nice guy?
This along with the mall chapter....
This author had a good concept for a series but didnt have enough foresight to make this a great one.