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Guyys, I wanna ask your opinion cus, I think there is some part that I have to edit. So, on page 17 there is the line "Does Fuyuki like girls?" right? Is those part okay? Or should I change it to "Fuyuki likes girls, right?"
The raw say "冬葵は女の人が好きなんだっけ" and I feel like the previous ver. is more like Senpai asking if Fuyuki likes girl and not like asking Fuyuki only likes women. Do you know what I mean? lol Please help, I overthinking again
The raw say "冬葵は女の人が好きなんだっけ" and I feel like the previous ver. is more like Senpai asking if Fuyuki likes girl and not like asking Fuyuki only likes women. Do you know what I mean? lol Please help, I overthinking again