Koujo Tensei: Densetsu no Dai Madoushi (♂), Hime Kishi to Narite Densetsu no Reijou Kishidan o Tsukuri Musou Suru - Ch. 14 - I am also tempering my b…

[Belkin]

O . o?
Not that I doubt she trained her ass muscles, but when the her underwear is made of kilos of woven metal and fabric, what chance does a few tacks going to have? Chicka, you need fucking framing nails made of mithril to even get her attention...

I forgot that she's using the piccolo training clothes 🤣

 

[BanditHadron]

The whole premise is kind of wonky.

They're claiming to try and preserve the school's dignity because the princess is bringing it down. But she hasn't really done anything to do so. Like she has perfect manners, she topped the entrance exam in academics, and the only reason she used physical force in the practical was because they sealed off magic usage. Like she's been shown to be a bit eccentric at worst.

Meanwhile the "dignified" school has the principal try to force royalty to fail because of an inane reason, has the student council actively harrassing and attempting to harm students as a completely normal thing, and allows rando students to publicly insult royalty.

Aye. That's what I've been thinking in the back of my mind so far this whole series.

I mean, come on, Princess Powerhouse hasn't actually caused any real problems thus far - in fact, she's even solved a few. At most, as you say, she's an eccentric that might cause a small loss of dignity (and I say small specifically because it's implied in this chapter that there are female soldiers in this universe, rare as they might be, as well as the princess having perfect manners and behaving in a polite manner).

It's rather forced, considering.

 

[ShikiAlter]

This chapter was so ass

 

[DirtEater21]

Thank you for the translation

 

[AbuHajaar]

Dat ass tho

 

[TGLurker]

Her future first friend and candidate for female knight? We can hope. She will need to remember her honor first.

 

[Mah_Buddy_Keith]

 

[randalthor20001]

I've always enjoyed the trope of an oblivious character being bullied. But is also insanely strong, and slowly wins over the people bullying them.

 

[randalthor20001]

I'm very pleased that the promise of a naked handstand for losing the bet, hasn't been forgotten. I eagerly await.

 

[randalthor20001]

In other good news, the next chapter releases in two weeks instead of the previous handful of chapters being every three weeks.

The translation has a few awkward sentences. There are some sentences where the meaning is changed to the exact opposite of the original. And there are also sentences where its hard for the reader to be sure what is being said.

"I've been tasked to locate a fresh, out-standing talent by father."
The use of "a" implies she is looking for a single person. When we know from the sentence preceding this one, and previous chapters, that she's trying to establish a female knight order. In other words, multiple women. Please remove the "a" from that sentence.

"Holds many things I pique my interests-"
This should be;
"Holds many things that pique my interest-"

"Something even more interesting than the cuisine of the royal court!"
This should be:
"What's most interesting of all, is the cuisine of the royal court!"
or:
"What piques my interest most of all, is the cuisine of the royal court!"
or:
"Something more interesting than that, is the cuisine of the royal court!"
or:
"The cuisine of the royal court!"
That last one seems short, but it fits perfectly with her previous thoughts from the preceding page: "But above all else...!"

"When I see some-one eating this much of food is pigs!"
Remove the word "of" from the sentence. It's awkward sounding and doesn't belong there.

 

[AncientWatcher]

Can't wait to see Claudia get beaten up. What a dumb evil bitch.

Pretty sure putting thumb tacks on someone's seat is illegal.

Errors: Page 2, top left panel, left most thought bubble. Maybe "I" should be replaced with "to".

Page 10, bottom left panel. Delete "the" or move it between "by" and "pigs".

 

[Yuyu_yusha]

Finger crossed, boys. It's hand stand time!!!

 

[Carn109]

nice ass

 

[RamenRider]

So is there gonna be any backlash for the student council for this bullying/hazing circle? It basically creates enemy nobility while weakening the overall state of the country. None of the bully victims are going to have loyalty to the crown and country instilled upon them. At best they’re all going to have grudges stewing beneath he surface that are easily exploited to cause internal strife or let themselves be enemy spies. Even worse is the amount of talent that must have been going down the drain or lost as a result.

 

[C-z-x]

They're about to know what a dense(Blackhole) our Princess is... Being a former guy at that..😂😂

 

[Dabaws]

Adamantium ass, noice

 

[Kllick]

Good luck to her future husband...

 

[galaxia9]

I was expecting her to air chair the whole school day but I guess an ass of steel crushing the pins also works.

 

[LordTartaros]

Of course she is

 

[Drumboo]

The cake was not a lie