You seriously need to work on your storyboarding. This feels like someone adapted their shitty fanfic that they wrote when they were 14. It really feels like stuff is just getting thrown at a wall.
@coldwarrior12
Did you just need longer to work on this chapter or something? I feel like the artwork was a rough draft compared with the previous 2 chapters. Unlike the comment above, I didn't mind the story this chapter, but please go back to the art style in the 1st 2 chapters...
@coldwarrior12
Did you just need longer to work on this chapter or something? I feel like the artwork was a rough draft compared with the previous 2 chapters. Unlike the comment above, I didn't mind the story this chapter, but please go back to the art style in the 1st 2 chapters...