If you want to do a re-translation because you felt the previous one wasn't up to par, you need to make sure the text size is appropriate. This is way to small, there is a ton of space in the bubbles for you to use different font/bigger size of the current font. The small size of the current one just makes the text blurry for people like me with bad eyesight. Yes, I can zoom in and that drops the quality of the chapter so it's lose-lose.
Edit: saw the comments on ch 2.2 where you are going to take over, so cudos to you for that, but the criticism still stands.