Kuni ni Saikyou no Barrier wo Hattara Heiwa ni Narisugite Tsuihousaremashita ~Ore no Mahou ga Yabasugite, Bijo to Mazoku ni Kakomarerun da ga!?~ - Vo…

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sorry wait is the mage oliver or is the guy oliver
Oliver (M)
o) Fighter
o) Teleports or moves fast
o) Takes down Caprese with one blow during the selection tourney for Knight Commander and was named to the post
o) Has the Gift of Possession where he can allow himself to be possessed by the ghosts of many sword masters

Olivier (F)
o) Long brown hair tied with bows in twin-tails
o) Stongest Court Mage
o) Kidnapped the elf messenger sent to Rayless
o) Actually came to see Rayless and isn't following Vaien's orders
o) Likes Rayless and is joining his team

Who decided to have one character named Oliver and another named Olivier?
He Chose Poorly on Make a GIF
 
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Ffs... this writer really can't write for shit😮‍💨. Now they're pushing the plot forward using stupidity? Ask yourselves this: how was he able to draw back his sword without touching the wall that was right behind him, that he ended up forward swinging directly into?! So dumb😂! He would've HAD TO hit the wall on the overhead draw of the sword before he could get stuck into it in his follow through!
 
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This is very shitty screenwriting. Clearly they can draw, but condensing a decent storyline is not one of the mangaka's skills as of this title. Maybe the issue is with the web novel, I wouldn't know… The fight choreography is also lacking.
 

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