Kurahime to Koikarasu (Serialization) - Ch. 2

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Nice! This is one of my favourite oneshots and I legitimately think about it regularly.
 
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I really hope it's not a oneshot anytime and we'll get more of the story
 
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Feedback: My only issue with this is the pacing, so far they been kinda speed running through plot points without much explanation or time to adjust to said setting. I like it overall but the pacing really got me carving for those lack of details.

Side Note: Would also love more movement from FMC whenever she's in battle. So far it just feels like she's just swinging a sword and doesn't actually have much skill in it. I'm aware this isn't true but the lack of movement and resistance from the Yokai make it seem like no skill is really required.(Ex. More dodging, more sword posture, more slash action. Right now it just feels a bit stiff.

End Point: Love the story, will continue reading and hopes it improves more as we go.
 

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