Kuro no Souzou Shoukanshi - Tenseisha no Hangyaku

[MangaDex]

 

[falafels]

The names of those church people are definitely supposed to be the german words for their respective colors:

Gerub -> Gelb
Burao -> Blau
Oranju -> Orange
Gryuun -> Grün
Vais -> Weiss/Weiß
Rord -> Rot

 

[gaigous]

Okay, the LN has to be more coherent than this.

 

[depzdai]

Wasn't that fox a bit dictating here? She just went here and there to her satisfaction while she could do little and the MC just followed her deeds. The other characters were badly made to some extent, too.

 

[WholeLot]

why most of the japanese author like to make an annoying girl companion for the mc...

 

[lolera222]

More than annoying, she just seems stupid/clumsy to me...

 

[LygarX]

I really wish he kept his long hair. would have made this more unique.

 

[TetraSky]

@WholeLot I'm guessing it's because they either had very little interaction with actual women/girls, or that's just how they view them, annoying, nagging, etc...

 

[uhuh]

I'm tired of gods making mistakes, i prefer when they are teleported without any explanation, better tha a ''superior entity'' making stupid mistakes, what a pain that a lot of isekais start like this.

 

[Rheeve]

@uhuh
Makes one wonder if it's mistakes or "mistakes", as in "This shit's getting stale and boring, let's "accidentally teleport/reincarnate" some poor soul and cause some chaos! Come on It'll be fun!"

 

[Zirconium_Corporation]

Well at least here the God takes part into the action. In most stories the God just gives blessing and then good luck. Notging more about it.

 

[azsharael]

Is good.

 

[Gyges]

Damn the dialogue is edgy.

 

[monkey123]

Almost as edgy/impressive as in The Lord of the Rings.

 

[LysandersTreason]

@Lymus

Here's the various ways the name of the main town in this manga has been spelled by LHT:

Liaberu
Ryabel
Riabel
Riabell
Riavel
Ryavel

Does LHT not have any proofreaders? Is a little consistency too much to ask?

 

[Lymus]

@LysandersTreason

Don't ask me, i'm just a reader/uploader of their work.
Feel free to drop by in their discord/website and tell them that.

 

[Nobu]

@LysandersTreason If you're so bothered by it why not try become a proofreader for them? (Not trying to shit talk, genuine question)

 

[LysandersTreason]

@nobu

I already am a proofreader for HelveticaScans

 

[Pai]

Way to try hard. You can't really enjoy it.

 

[okami]

Does the pacing feel off to anybody else?
It feels way to fast in everything it does.