Kuromaku Ikka ni Tensei Shita kedo Gensaku Mushishite Dokuritsu Suru

[Lake1A]

I provide zero criticism of the story, but just want to point out the saintess' face in the art reminds me of Dokibird's.

That is all.

 

[Reddead65704]

Pretty funny so far, but I'm so sick of this "Stay away from the main plot" troupe bs. Like there's no guarantee that the mc is gonna follow every single action the the npc version of him did, so there's no way anything similar could happen anyways. Maybe if it's like Greatest Estate Developer, but still that's rare.

 

[Vicic]

HARD carried by the Saintess design

 

[1NFERN0.Triple.A]

Noooooo but the art is so good 😭

 

[DarekaNa]

Wait... Hiatus? Why?

 

[megaguil]

Damn, a hiatus this early in a series doesn’t usually bode well. Seems like it might be health issues or an accident? I’m just assuming here, as the scheduling doesn’t seem too horrific.

Hope it comes back soon, it was an interesting story so far.

 

[Dirt_Lord]

big titted slave girls not even halfway through chapter 1.
0/10

 

[Maphapthieunu]

this shi is so ass. imagine drawing this good but just shi ass with making a real story. rpg hero game this that, what about actually making a story about the hero !? but i guess that just wont sell, people want to isekai and became landlord and shi.

 

[KillerTyphoons]

Otome isekai is on the rise again. Not complaining, this kind of stuff is my jam for some reason.

 

[L04d3r]

Reincarnated as the villain troupe avoiding a death flag is not really bad but the like of this putting all the stereotypes and try hard comidic writing is just sad to read. This ¥1 mass produce badly written slop is oversaturating the genre.

 

[Rox-as]

maybe i'm a bit too paranoid, but the art for this looks AI assisted, especially the hair dryer in panel 1 page 2 chapter 2

edit: the more I examine the panels the more it seems AI assisted
you could chalk it up to human error, but the art is far too inconsistent between panels and sometimes character proportions change dramatically between pages as well. arms becoming thicker or thinner, fingers becoming longer or abnormally small, ears becoming longer etc.

I definitely think it is.
I feel like the illustrator maybe had too much of a time crunch that they started to use AI, but I just looked back at the first chapter, and there was still definite use of AI.
Sometimes lines just looked too blurred and some mistakes look too perfect to be a human error.

Personally, this doesn’t bother me much because this story was already basic and it’s clear their hook, like most, is tiddy women. I’m just gonna drop this manga with no remorse.

 

[Schillerpin]

4 chapters and hiatus well damn this kinda stories i do like em but a hiatus so early for this rather generic kind of story is extremely bad

 

[S1NALOWL]

carried by the art to be honest, story is bland and just feels like its ticking boxes, then again its only been 5 chapters, i dont think you people should be rating it as high as you are when the story has barely started though.

 

[Derpthenerd]

slop with a hint of soul

 

[The_H_Guy]

Uncensored scans of this manga exist.

 

[hahanaho]

The artist is not good with facial expressions. Kinda confusing because the rest looks good. Perhaps he used references pretty heavily? That’s why the faces look limited and don’t always match the situation?

Manga is pretty slapsticky. I like it.

Story is rushed.

 

[Mystyc_Cheez]

This is just the tip of the iceberg.
Assuming that he is was a reincarnator he was 14 and up the age. Somehow to my understanding (from LN/WN reviews) he will surround himself with children around age 10.
The most annoying and boring experience for me would be to reincarnate with my memory intact and communicate with children. In many manga series for some reason authors do not do this (understand the big divide between adults and children, there is a huge life experience gap), either they are closet pedos OR they didn't have any interaction with children.

I think its because japan is full of people who didnt grow up

 

[Monn12]

I think its because japan is full of people who didnt grow up

You might be right. Especially the target audience.