Kyuuketsuki Maruguritto to Kuenai Gokinjo

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I think there is no need for this to be a series. It's good as a one-off.
 
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Tragedy tag should be removed, since none of the main characters experience irreversible loss.

Nice oneshot, though.
 
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damn I want it to be a series where a romance between the characters
 
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@Emperor_Late

That should be tragic background, not enough for the tragedy genre??
Well, I'm not sure.

Thanks for the mention anyways, I almost missed that point.
 
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There is nothing to serialize. It looks perfect as a oneshot.

There is also too much holes in the plot. But it was a nice reading.
 
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@vodkavodka still more pages mean more time to develop a story / fix any occurring plot holes + "there is nothing to serialize" is just showing a lack of imagination , who knows maybe the author have something in the store , at least i prefer staying optimistic
 
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What I want to see from this: a continuation in such that shows what she's been up to after the ending, the comedy of her getting used to the world around her, and maybe some other fun stuff, like any agreements she has for legal feeding, alternatives to human blood, maybe a job at the prison feeding on those in death row? It would make for quite the serialization if ever done.

After reading this story I seriously want to go and write now. It opened up a world of ideas to me.
 
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A very well done oneshot. A basic premise used to explore some basic themes, but well executed and with great artwork. Predictable in all the right ways. Also didn't overstay its welcome, which is greatly appreciated. Could easily serve as the foundation of an anthology style series, maybe. Well worth a read.
 

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