Kyuuseishu ≪MESHIA≫~Isekai wo Sukutta Moto Yuusha ga Mamono no Afureru Genjitsu Sekai wo Musou Suru~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 24 - A Monster Beyond Monsters

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Had I been the editor, I would have handed the last three pages of the storyboard to the author, and said “Eat them. Now. To-morrow, give me three pages that don't insult the intelligence of the customer. Or I'll be telling the publisher to cancel this series.”
 
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Had I been the editor, I would have hand the last three pages of the storyboard to the author, and said “Eat them. Now. To-morrow, give me three pages that don't insult the intelligence of the customer. Or I'll be telling the publisher to cancel this series.”
You greatly overestimate the intelligence of the average reader...
 
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her intro is kinda irritating
kinda hope MC would sucker punch when she at her most confident
and put her "fun" into humiliating shame
 
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A normal person reaction

Oh shit, that girl about to come in! Better tell her I'm in here right now so there won't be any issues!

Takeru's reaction

Oh shit, that girl about to come in! I better hide behind this rock and wait for her to leave even though there's a high chance that I'll be discovered!
As was said in this same chapter, he's a lecher pervert. So, he would naturally hide behind a rock and then try to peep.
 

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