You guys said the first 4 chapters were good, liars
Definitely written by a woman, no group of guys talk about girls that much, usually, games, funny stuff, or stuff we've heard before, not, girlfriends, I can't remember once asking a guy about his girlfriend, nor did he ever bring her up, like, ever (Maybe women don't want to hear that they're not the center of attention 24/7, but it's extremely true, normally, you only hear, well, nothing, you never hear "My girlfriend was so nice today", like who tf says that?)
No guy would act like that in ch13 "I guess it can't be helped I'll ask her" "You aren't it's owner anyway", it's so fucking bad lmao
No guy would be that possessive over a key he doesn't care about (just to be petty) nor would he approach a girl over another guy he can talk to right now (Guys care about both sides of the story, and trust guys more, you could say the same as a girl would trust other girls more too)
Guys keep each other in check, pettiness isn't tolerated, it leads to fights. No guy wants to be decked, far too quick and easy to be.
(No guy would be that petty and turn their back so casually, like literally ever)
Also, her "It doesn't matter it feels good" line, just give her to meth already, keep the ball rolling
Garbage, 1/10, just look at ch12-13, completely childish
Edit: replaced a t with an r