Lili-Men - Ch. 2 - For Whose Sake Does the Dream Come True?

[MangaDex]

 

[lacrosse34]

Is english the first language of the translator? I feel like certain small corrections grammatically would drastically improve the fluidity of the sentences. No disrespect because im glad someone is translating this series but it's just a thought.

 

[Roxy377]

this is getting goood
thanks for the translations

 

[Aoitenshi]

I wonder why they call it succubus when they look nothing like in the lores. Have they undergone an evolution or something?

 

[pat58152]

Is english the first language of the translator? I feel like certain small corrections grammatically would drastically improve the fluidity of the sentences. No disrespect because im glad someone is translating this series but it's just a thought.

no it isn't sorry. I only do this in my free time if I work with many people it might messed with my schedue

 

[KimKowabunga]

Glad someone is translating this, the english does sound a tad unnatural, but as long as its not a machine translation it's fine.

 

[Male]

no it isn't sorry. I only do this in my free time if I work with many people it might messed with my schedue

I mean no offense but an English proofreader would dramatically improve this. I could proofread if you wanted. Working with only one other person shouldn't negative impact your schedule much.

 

[lacrosse34]

no it isn't sorry. I only do this in my free time if I work with many people it might messed with my schedue

You’re good man , i’m glad it’s getting translated either way I appreciate that.