Dex-chan lover
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- May 4, 2024
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It's a shame, because she is a talented erotic artist who can pull together these great powerful (hot) panels and the ingredients were all there (I was hooked for the first 3 chapters and I still kind of want Rose to step on me) but I can't shake the feeling she needed a better writer or editor in the room to collaborate with, or at the very least some more revisions. It is only 4 chapters in so maybe it will surprise us but I feel a little pessimistic.I wanted to reply to your insightful message, as I also believe this was a missed opportunity. It's too bad you're not the one writing the story! I think there's an element of wanting readers to see themselves in Lily as this super submissive character who is completely dominated by Rose. After all, being dominated and losing oneself to pleasure is a big part of the fetish. But normally there would be more build up.
My masochism led me all the way through BTD so I will probably follow this one to the end...I really love how she draws, despite my complaints and criticisms of the plotting.
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