Liv - Oneshot

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It was ok. The concept is pretty good, could work if it was expanded.
Kinda cringed at the blatant coincidences (the moment she manages to say she loves him she gets shot, she got bit by a zombie when she was about to confess) but it's kinda to be expected from a oneshot.
 

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