Hello BonelessSushi, I recently came across this manga and really enjoy your work and style. I noticed some areas that I think could be improved with cleaning and redrawing which would take the artwork to the next level. If you are open to feedback, I would be happy to provide some specific examples privately. Please don't take this as criticism, just potential suggestions in case you are looking to refine certain pages. I could also provide examples from my experience. Please let me know if you would be interested in discussing further. I wish you the best with your creative projects