If i could suggest...i think using the first name of each caracter will be easier to remember. And only point the family name when they are introduced or in the moment where it was important or require their full name>< aaand thank you for kindly translating this!
Okay, so she's out to get revenge on the You family (confusing name in English) in order to avenge her mother and sister? Interesting, I'm willing to follow along...
this was so messy and all over the place. If this isn't a mistake in rearranging the pages and panels then the author has the worst pacing and story telling ever