Love Quest for a Servant Girl - Vol. 1 Ch. 24

[Der-Maudadist]

Well for the first time,especially when done alone,it is an alright translation
Here some tips;
For next time; If you don't like the watermark censor it all the time or just don't do it at all. The way how you censored it with the white paint was in the way in seeing the expressions/details in the art style
Be careful with the pronouns in the future,like the story is (mostly) the main reason why this manhwa for example is quite popular + the art style.

But hey,please skip to an untranslated manhwa.
There are many good ones that other's didn't pick up yet to choose from!
There is a reason why snipping isn't respected in this community
I bet you could have a bright future tho,you did your best afterall

 

[yellow6000]

its not that bad for the first one you've done, and you also did it urself so its all good! i hope that you apply to other translation groups c: