Madonna ga Glass Case no Naka - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Circumstances

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Too decent for my taste.
She needs to be 6 and he - at least 50. Also belly fat would be great. Thanks.
 
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It's getting a bit more serious, and I liked seeing everyone treat her well (teach about reptiles, the owner and son treating her like a little cousin/niece, etc.).

Get rid of the pedo references though. Stuff like "lusting after a younger girl" can work in a story if you're using it to send a message the audience can agree with, but I don't think the author's handling it well. I think he messed up when he introduced the MC as someone we(the audience) could actually see becoming a sexual predator and didn't immediately move us in a direction that suggested he wouldn't.
 
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we have an excuse now for the FBIes... we PEDOHILES! R JUST PROTECTING LOLIS! BY GIVING THEM WARMTH! THAT THEY DESERVES! but i swear that im not a pedohile
 

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