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The artwork is superb.

But I could feel some of the "crunch" towards the end, where the exposition got a little heavy handed. This really felt like a typical, two-part intro chapter to a serialization until that point.

I imagine it would need some cleaning up to actually be a successful serialization, but there's an appeal here.
 
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let's say this gets serialized. which one would be the main character? the princess as she navigates the politics inside the castle? or delivery boy as he struggle with life in the slums?
 
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let's say this gets serialized. which one would be the main character? the princess as she navigates the politics inside the castle? or delivery boy as he struggle with life in the slums?
por que no los dos
 

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