Mahou Shoujo ♡ Misoji - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - What if a 35 year old single woman became a magical girl part 2

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Look, I get why you're trying to include "hopping" in every one of his sentences, but you're trying so hard to incorporate his gobi that I feel like it's warping your ability to just convey what the bunny is saying. I'd take ending more sentences with just a random "hop" over every hopping sentence being twisted to include a hopping minced oath.
 
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Thank you. First chapter was hilarious. Can't wait to see the crap she gets pulled into. Poor woman LOL
 
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Can that bunny change their appearance become a friend(human) that stay in her house.
 
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Thank you thank you for continuing this! I’ve so wanted to see what happens next!
 
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Thanks a lot for picking it up ! I loved the first chapter back then so I'm really happy to be able to read the next chapters :win:
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