I read the MTL and motokare side by side and motokare is much better, for example in page 22 Mia in MTL said "that's how you think of magic!?" and I got confused why she said that and motokare "Magic works like that?!" is a lot make more sense with the story flow.
That's why I hope you can continue, if you need cleaning I think I can handle it a bit. I don't have much experience with scnlation works but I can use photoshop and got a tablet. Just give me a call.