Nah, its not the problem of lacking a proofreader. This is what happen when you type as you go. I noticed the typos already (there are others too) just didnt get around fixing them yet
As do slimes
Yeah thanks a lot for this version.Read yours first, saw your comment page about the other, peaked at it, immediately came back here to comment how trash that other one is. Well done on your version, very clean and easy to read.