Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei - Kaichou Senkyo-hen - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - The Presidential Election and The Queen

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So the final chapter is here. Let me know if I missed any typos... I gave it 2 extra proof reads but there is always one...

Anyway hope you enjoyed the series and with this 4 arcs are now complete and the rest are being worked on so we'll get them done eventually. Thanks for reading.
 
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There wasn't as much as last time (there were probably a lot of places you could've put a comma but here are the ones that kinda stood out):
page 9:

top right panel: "The 'Chosen People Ideology' that denies couse 2 students this privilege of becoming a student council officer is wrong"

- change "couse" to "course" (typo)

"the truth is there is a couse 2 student..."

- same problem as previous one

page 21:

"And then compressed them to stuff them back into miyuki sans body"

- add " ' " into " sans"

after change: "And then compressed them to stuff them back into Miyuki san's body"

Page 28:

"From now on please request First Magic High School's President Ah chan"

- replace "request" with "welcome" (to me i think it makes more sense)

- add a comma after "president"

after change: "From now on please welcome First Magic High School's President, Ah chan"


"Now I've become president what should I call you~?"

- insert "that" in between "now" and "I've"

- add comma after "president"

after change: "Now that I've become president, what should I call you~?"
 
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Thanks for pointing those Couses out, they're so obvious now how'd I miss them, and the sans too. I'll correct them now.

I spotted ballets which should be ballots too.

The last page is true to the RAW, so I'll have to leave it as is (she specifically says request, as in ask for, but with formal speech, and there is no that since it's casual speech).

All corrections done, thanks again to Joelasdasd and One for point out the silly mistakes.
 
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Thank you very much for translating the whole thing so quickly. It's very appreciated!
 
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Wow good job man! Appreciate it.
And Joelasdasd, you feels like a QC person. Thanks for your effort too.
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Xd, for the people who read Koto Nairan-hen Chapter 2, this is what the students were talking about...not animated because reasons.
 
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thank you for completing this arc. Yuzuki n dash's art was amazing for this as well as summer break arc definitely the best art for the series so far. Hope there will be more mahouka manga translations for sequels visitors arc, double seven, ancient city etc.
there is alphabet missing on page 9 when asano is arguing with mayumi she says "The truth is theRe is a student......." R is missing there.
 
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Gaaah, the R escaped when I was fixing couse's!!! It's fixed. Sorry about that, thanks RUD3DUD3.
 
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Why are the votes invalid for the siblings? Where did I miss the explanation for that?
 
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Even members of the electoral college in the U.S. have screwed up their votes by using a different name than either of the candidates. In 2004, one of the Minnesota electors didn't cast his vote for John Kerry or George Bush. He voted for "John Ewards,"as both the president and vice president, which was presumably a spelling error of John Kerry's running mate. Sometimes this will get the elector in trouble, and their vote will go to whoever their state was supposed to be voting for on the position they screwed up... but not every time. That's another, somewhat depressing, matter that might be going too deep on this subject considering the time, place, and reason I'm even talking about this.
 

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