@leadrous
There wasn't as much as last time (there were probably a lot of places you could've put a comma but here are the ones that kinda stood out):
page 9:
top right panel: "The 'Chosen People Ideology' that denies couse 2 students this privilege of becoming a student council officer is wrong"
- change "couse" to "course" (typo)
"the truth is there is a couse 2 student..."
- same problem as previous one
page 21:
"And then compressed them to stuff them back into miyuki sans body"
- add " ' " into " sans"
after change: "And then compressed them to stuff them back into Miyuki san's body"
Page 28:
"From now on please request First Magic High School's President Ah chan"
- replace "request" with "welcome" (to me i think it makes more sense)
- add a comma after "president"
after change: "From now on please welcome First Magic High School's President, Ah chan"
"Now I've become president what should I call you~?"
- insert "that" in between "now" and "I've"
- add comma after "president"
after change: "Now that I've become president, what should I call you~?"