Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei - Kyuukousen-hen - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - After the Exams

[MangaDex]

 

[TheFiller]

@Leadrous i hope we can see more chapters from you about Mahouka

 

[Leadrous]

Thankyou,

That's the plan, I did this chapter for practise since a version was missing on MangaDex. I'll be doing Yokohama next since no one is doing it and I've got the RAWs. MSD are doing the other arcs.

 

[Kisato]

@Leadrous

Looks like you're using MS Paint and Arial. Stop that. Gimp and Wild Words. Clean out bubbles before typesetting. Make sure next is aligned properly.

Those are my criticisms.

 

[Leadrous]

@Kisato

Thanks for the feedback, looking at it compared to the other chapters the Ariel font is a bit to ridged so I'll change that going forwards to a softer one.
I can't really defend the uncleaned text bubbles and the text is a little wonky so I'll endeavour to do a better job next time. I was more focused on the translation quality this time to be honest
I'll look into the Gimp program too.

Thanks again for the feedback. I'll use it to improve

 

[chaz1776]

@Leadrous

While Kisato has some legit criticisms, I think a lot of us would prefer a release over a fret for perfection. Your scan is perfectly readable imo. We can all strive to get better in the things we do in life but that doesn't mean we do a poor job in the meantime. Thanks for the scan and I look forward to more!

 

[larcek]

Thanks for the release and your future plans. I pretty much size with chaz1776 here. I'd like to see further releases, so some minor imperfections are fine with me. thanks again :3

 

[Leadrous]

Thankyou both for your kind words. My priority is the translation quality since I lack the art skills necessary to do a perfect job so I wont delay for perfection on the art. Plus the more I do the better the quality will get so hopefully the next will be cleaner too. Thanks again

 

[readercat]

lmao 'Onii-sama is the best' Miyuki

 

[Black_Magician]

BS magicians gets me everytime lmao