honestly. don't start with a credit page that tells people it's "machine translated" when you did further work on this. maybe aside 1-2 bubbles it all felt very aligned to the respective context and has been very readable. since this chapter is about internal politics and restating earlier happenings from the series, much could have gone wrong but i didn't notice anything wrong. a well done job on the chapter overall!
as for the story, i'm suprised we saw one family drop out, i always thought they'd pull some tricks to keep this round the same.