Bruh, if you don't even know how to typeset or edit, why even put out this trash? Do you hate the manga so much that you're butchering the drawings? This manga doesn't deserve your disrespect. Also, learn to use correct grammar.
-You're missing commas and periods on pages 4-7, 10 , 15-20.
-You've mixed up past and present tense on page 4.
-You've mixed up present and future tense on page 7.
-'score the test' is the wrong phrase to use on page 5.
-You didn't even finish translating page 8, 11-13, 18, 20-21.
-Your grammar on the red moon-blue star question on page 11 is atrocious.
Please, for the sake of this manga, stop while you're ahead and leave the work to people who actually enjoy the manga and can do a good job. And for the sake of my eyes, never touch Photoshop again. Go have 'fun' on another manga that actually deserves a shitty rush job.
Edit: Can't comment on the quality of the translation since I haven't looked at the raws, but considering the ESL tone used throughout the chapter, I'm fairly confident that it's inaccurate as well.