@overunderthrust If you guys are going to make these edits, I'd also suggest changing country/nation to kingdom or something since they didn't have those concepts back in 16th century Europe.
Also on p.18, the spell she chants is chinchin (penis) not the normal chichin. Suggesting "penis wenis go away" or something like that.
Other mistakes I've spotted:
P.3 "Seems that half of her friends have been burned at the stake" should be "Many (a majority) of our friends/colleagues/ us witches...", and "What kind of place would like to live" should be "What kind of place would you like to live in?"
P.7 "I've finally found them" should be "I've finally found it" (the apartment), and "But I was able to stay in one piece" should be something like "But I've managed to locate her".