Majo to Kyurasu - Ch. 1 - First puff “Witches and Reunions”

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Actually seems quite interesting! In the end, Shien-sama was anxious too, huh... Hopefully they can get some of their former glory back, or at the very least create some good memories in the process after reuniting after so long.
 
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@overunderthrust If you guys are going to make these edits, I'd also suggest changing country/nation to kingdom or something since they didn't have those concepts back in 16th century Europe.
Also on p.18, the spell she chants is chinchin (penis) not the normal chichin. Suggesting "penis wenis go away" or something like that.
Other mistakes I've spotted:
P.3 "Seems that half of her friends have been burned at the stake" should be "Many (a majority) of our friends/colleagues/ us witches...", and "What kind of place would like to live" should be "What kind of place would you like to live in?"
P.7 "I've finally found them" should be "I've finally found it" (the apartment), and "But I was able to stay in one piece" should be something like "But I've managed to locate her".
Thanks for the Penis Wenis suggestion
 
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Shibata Kouhei manga! YESSS!

This is my Favorite manga author, of them all. No one has their sense of humor or style. So excited they have a new series!

Thanks for the translation, EAGERLY looking forward to the next release!
 
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Other mistakes I've spotted:
P.3 "Seems that half of her friends have been burned at the stake" should be "Many (a majority) of our friends/colleagues/ us witches...", and "What kind of place would like to live" should be "What kind of place would you like to live in?"
P.7 "I've finally found them" should be "I've finally found it" (the apartment), and "But I was able to stay in one piece" should be something like "But I've managed to locate her".
@overunderthrust by the way the "Pg 3" mistakes are actually on Pg 4. (The "Pg 7" mistakes are indeed on Pg 7.)
 
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Been playing Schedule I lately, I thought selling those drugs n consuming myself gonna make me high ingame
Doesn't relaize I just found this high ass manga to pair with it, n gae ass lesbos witches with drugs?
Boy that sentences won't come more wrong that it is now
Sign me up !
 
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This is doomer tier :fml:

I'm not really hype with this first chapter. Maybe the next chapters will change my mind.
 
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quite a start, i guess it might be hard to sell cigs but i wonder if she dressed up as a stereotypical 'fortune teller' and lit incense as 'lure' she'd get customers that way

But surprised she didn't get kicked out unless whoever the landlord/landlady is, rents out to other' suspicious' ppl as long as they pay
 

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