I saw the Spanish version and yeah this is faithful !! but you got me worried with the inserted jokes, I think they're fine if you put them between the panel lines but not in the text bubbles, but that aside, you have my gratitude, I don't know if a group would pick this up now but you raised the possibility a lot and that's amazing, besides, for your first release this is pretty nice.
I really love this story and I just want more people to read it.