Mankitsu Shitai Jouren-san - Ch. 28

[Kaizerdist]

Editors or producers sometimes ask for stuff to be rewriteen to be "commercial," and authors often self-censor like that on their own. Mature and pithy stories in VNs have to be filled with anime tropes and fanservice so that they can sell a 90+ (?) hour novel that caters to what editors think it's the weeb audience. Systems can get you a consistent result without being directed by a small group of conspirators. This is hard for some to understand.

Ah, makes sense. I've seen this for a few other things. Shits gotta sell, it's just expected . Thanks for the information kind internet being.

 

[Erricane]

That almost turned into NTR. And not the kind I like.

 

[hentako]

I don't know how to else reconcile the fact that we got one instance of almost porn at the start, a slow slide to wholesome (With horny bait twitter advertising), then sporadic fanservice and Yuri. Couple that with getting more almost porn when the main story isn't implicated.

There hasn't been any "almost porn" since the beginning. There was one tiny bit of an extra chapter that was straight up lewd shit. And until now almost every chapter has included Izumi. This chapter is so far an odd one out, it doesn't have Izumi and amps up the lewdness quite a bit, at least visually. Really something you can judge the rest of it on, though, who knows where it might go. So far it's basically started with a lewd hook and then been two characters slowly getting closer with a bunch of lewd bait spread throughout. Don't get me wrong, I'd really like to have the lewd part be more than a hook...

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

There hasn't been any "almost porn" since the beginning. There was one tiny bit of an extra chapter that was straight up lewd shit.

Right. I said that. Thank you. The first chapter, then the extras, which fall under the category of "Don't implicate the main story", and the bonus chapters, which fall under the same category.

And until now almost every chapter has included Izumi. This chapter is so far an odd one out, it doesn't have Izumi and amps up the lewdness quite a bit, at least visually. Really something you can judge the rest of it on, though, who knows where it might go. So far it's basically started with a lewd hook and then been two characters slowly getting closer with a bunch of lewd bait spread throughout. Don't get me wrong, I'd really like to have the lewd part be more than a hook...

I don't know if the rest is directed at me, or if you decided to start sharing your thoughts about the series generally, but I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say at this point.

 

[TheEjaculator]

I do not want this yuri mess, when do we have her and the MC interact again?

unfortunately he was unavailable this chapter, he was getting his balls drained by the onee-san

 

[INBERUN]

Ok so now we have ntr bait and yuri... Another fluffy series is fkd. Why u ask? "Friend"squeeze ass of fmc and then some stranger is huging fmc from behind and press her tits... Wtf is wrong with this "wholesome" series?

 

[INBERUN]

"Totally ok!"

"Whoa hold on there buddy, only I get to do that, time to die." ............

That was start of Axe in romcom series.. wtf is that ntr stfu

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Ok so now we have ntr bait and yuri... Another fluffy series is fkd. Why u ask? "Friend"squeeze ass of fmc and then some stranger is huging fmc from behind and press her tits... Wtf is wrong with this "wholesome" series?

Did you not see the first chapter?

 

[luigiymario2]

Damn, do assholes really get more ballsy these days...

 

[draxdeveloper]

Violence it's not the answer, it's the question

 

[Geardofwario]

Show the nipple you cowards!

 

[raze2012]

Wtf is wrong with this "wholesome" series?

I mean, it did start with an employee finding one of her customers masturbating in her private reading room ("Again", according to his response). We were never promised fluff.

 

[EFMD]

Cursed spot of light!

 

[hispirus]

"Totally ok!"

"Whoa hold on there buddy, only I get to do that, time to die." ............

Because that's literally the exact same situation! A girl of similar build touches the butt of a character while on land, versus the same character being held in a bear hug from behind by a dude, who has the requisite upper body strength of their muscles being drenched in testosterone for years on end, possibly pressing his genitals against the same butt, with the added reckless endangering of her life with a nonchalant threat of drowning. Yep… Equivocating this was the objectively correct take

 

[AshenHalo]

oh id fucking chase em down and at least keep em under for 30 secs and maybe 2 punches
if you are interested in someone DONT FUCKIN TOUCH EM WITHOUT CONSENT like how tf did these people grow up ugh

 

[Jackist]

Because that's literally the exact same situation! A girl of similar build touches the butt of a character while on land, versus the same character being held in a bear hug from behind by a dude, who has the requisite upper body strength of their muscles being drenched in testosterone for years on end, possibly pressing his genitals against the same butt, with the added reckless endangering of her life with a nonchalant threat of drowning. Yep… Equivocating this was the objectively correct take

You're right! It is literally the exact same situation. Good thing you agree. Because assuming someone's gender = their physical ability is crazy in 2024 right? Right?

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

You're right! It is literally the exact same situation. Good thing you agree. Because assuming someone's gender = their physical ability is crazy in 2024 right? Right?

We're reaching levels of sarcasm and satire as of yet unseen on this Earth. Does @Jackist think men and women are the same? Does he understand they're different? And does he know that friends touching you is different from strangers grabbing you? Find out all this and more next time on MANGADEX MADNEEEEESS!

 

[INBERUN]

We're reaching levels of sarcasm and satire as of yet unseen on this Earth. Does @Jackist think men and women are the same? Does he understand they're different?And does he know that friends touching you is different from strangrs grabbing you? Find out all this and more next time on MANGADEX MADNEEEEESS!

I dont even kno what is going on here anymore.. but i will say this. One upon a time (a lot of times) i was on the beach with friends girls/boys and my male and female friends werent touching others like this "friend" did... Yeah just let u kno how friends are working. Even in 2024. Going further with bear hug. eeem its rather veryyy! very! Rare for stranger to do these things to random very young girl.. author want a hentai at this point? This manga doesnt make any sense in this chapter. I kno that i may be wrong but think about it - beach - random young girl (looking like 16y) - many people around - yeah i will grab her from behind and and! I will hug her tits...... Yeah very logical move dear author. This manga is going in disgusting direction.

 

[AssillaTheBuns]

If youre gonna go with the sleazebag beachdudes trope, at least have the common decency to beat the shit out of them...