Maou no Musume, Sugoku Choroi. - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

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Conquered with nothing more than a feather and a light touch. As expected of the Hero.
 
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It seems as if this 'control' she has over the Hero is pretty nonexistent so far, it feels like all she did was revive him XD
 
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She has fallen, I repeat she has fallen. Is it bad that the moment I saw she sent the bat into his shirt I thought, oh hey the bat’s going to eat the big isn’t it?

I think that would have been a better punchline, at first it starts tickling him more as it eats the but, she starts laughing before becoming embarrassed , then the bat flies away and he gets up, she doesn’t notice any of this happening since by then she’s turned around and is facing the wall, then the rest of the chapter plays out. I feel like that would have added that extra punch y’know? She caused her own downfall in multiple ways, which would have been funny.
 

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