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I found diamond
Also time travel.For the most part I agree, but there are some egregiously stupid plot devices I have trouble reading. Chief among them is the utter crutch that is mind control. It is a cancerous affliction that once used will quickly spirals out of control and take over a story.
That's exactly what I though, for all we know they were the ones who caused the earthquake to begin with.They all just straight up believe that they were "saved" by the summoning? That this "earthquake" hardly even mentioned (had to re-read to see verify if they even mentioned what they thought killed them), was both natural, and that horrible to have immediately killed everyone? Not even people who lasted half an hour later bleeding out to confirm it, just "oh, there was shaking, it must have been an earthquake killed us like they said, and not just a by-product of the abduction process"