Maou-sama no Machizukuri! ~Saikyou no Dungeon wa Kindai Toshi~ - Ch. 70 - Unforgettable Feeling

[MangaDex]

 

[nibroc18]

Damn Stolas steeled herself way quicker than Marcos

 

[Julsmit]

...is this really the best the author could come up with?

 

[Shiromon]

this shit is so fucking ass, can't wait until we're done with this horrendous arc. What the fuck's the author thinking, why did he reduce Marco's IQ to negative 500, why the fuck would she treat Black like he's Amon when SHE KNOWS IT'S JUST SOMEONE ELSE PUPPETEERING HIS CORPSE.
Garbage fucking writing

 

[Kippithekappamancer]

Author just had to bring up your waifus ex and turn her into dead weight for the sake of plot

Fuck Amon btw. He's not even that likeable.

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the update

 

[HAMBURGERMAN]

THIS IS WHY WE DONT BRING BITCHES WITH PTSD TO MEET THE PEOPLE THAT BROUGHT THEM THAT PTSD BC WHEN IT MATTERS MOST THEY FUMBLE THE FUCKING BAG WHY THE CHILD ACCEPT SHE GOTTA COOK HER DAD BEFORE YOU ON GAWD MARCO GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER

 

[morichiro]

I really liked Marco as a character, now she's like what my cat leaves on her litterbox

What a way to fuck up a character.

 

[JosebaZilarte]

No matter how guilt-ridden Marco is. She was never the type of girl to be this gullible and meek.

...not that other characters in this chapter are treated with respect, but this is almost "character assassination".

 

[FantasyMaster]

It's enough author. This arc is over already, it's time to let it go.

 

[kaminomikan]

ugh... that later half of the chapter is disgusting...

 

[AnotherDuck]

Not hard to see why she'd find this difficult.

And inside, they're also fighting someone they don't want to. Or at least one of them.

If you take a big hit, you bleed from the mouth. That's a law or something.

Her choice should be easy, but delusions can be powerful. Still, this is dumb, as she only needs to actually think for a second.

Damn Stolas steeled herself way quicker than Marcos

Shows who's the best girl.

 

[spinder]

This is just stupid.

 

[MavericMC]

"Yes it is I your beloved who was just maniacally laughing a second ago, although I just said that you have mistaken me for your beloved but ignore what I said back then"

 

[BalrogDeMorgoth]

This is so retarded, it's LITERALLY not him and they all know and HE JUST FUCKING SAID IT LIKE TWICE, there's literally NO reason for her to hesitate.

 

[savris]

"Yes it is I your beloved who was just maniacally laughing a second ago, although I just said that you have mistaken me for your beloved but ignore what I said back then"

Fucks sake, Marco Goddamn author.... seriously

 

[ZeroWWE]

2 months and we get this shit?

 

[AbuHajaar]

You know what, fuck it I'm rooting for Mr. Black, he's back (insert that Killer Instinct 2 theme song) and he's gonna steal yo gurl

 

[Kurro]

...is this really the best the author could come up with?

The original story was to be honest crap/not so good. This story is not from the original LN author....and it still crap/not so good. This manga is only like 40% or less the same as the LN. The LN was ok, the manga..well for me is terrible. Waaaay to long winded. IN the LN the whole black thing was taken care of pretty quickly, not this convoluted mess

It's pretty simple really, the author just isn't that good at writing. Sure better then I could do, but it's still not to my liking (and more people seeing the comments). Though to LN left so little impression with me that I can't remember most of it. Again, it's a meh tier writer.

 

[Silberdrachi]

"I..."
"am a little bitch"
The End.