Maou-sama, Retry! R - Vol. 4 Ch. 16

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Thanks for the upload! Although, granted, I'm not sure what happened to the previous chapter 16
 
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the pronoun all over the place, i mean kongming is her but keep referred as he/him
In all the other pages, Kongming is refering to Koumei or to General Leon. Though I am not entirely sure who Beatrice refers to in Page 7. If you know, plz msg me on Discord, and I will change it promptly
 
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In all the other pages, Kongming is refering to Koumei or to General Leon. Though I am not entirely sure who Beatrice refers to in Page 7. If you know, plz msg me on Discord, and I will change it promptly
page 4 Koumei=Kongming its basically same person depend in writer in monologue that bratty PM talk about why she did what she did but you refer it to he/him not she/her, also after that this might nitpick but you misspelled Koumei to Koumai, after that the "High King" referred to Beatrice, so its should be She not He, i forgot this part in LN is Beatrice referred as High King or Queen
the last in page 7 supposed to referred to Koumei since Leon and many people misunderstood Koumei is the one who hold Cake hostage when only Koumei who had guess its Devil doing
as for page 11 and 12 i actually confused why Koumei refer herself as he and why Beatrice talking about the priestess in this context when she blame Koumei here
 
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page 4 Koumei=Kongming its basically same person depend in writer in monologue that bratty PM talk about why she did what she did but you refer it to he/him not she/her, also after that this might nitpick but you misspelled Koumei to Koumai, after that the "High King" referred to Beatrice, so its should be She not He, i forgot this part in LN is Beatrice referred as High King or Queen
the last in page 7 supposed to referred to Koumei since Leon and many people misunderstood Koumei is the one who hold Cake hostage when only Koumei who had guess its Devil doing
as for page 11 and 12 i actually confused why Koumei refer herself as he and why Beatrice talking about the priestess in this context when she blame Koumei here
Changed it, tried to correct it as much as I could.
 
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