Marika-chan no Koukando wa Bukkowarete iru - Ch. 8

[MangaDex]

 

[multithrust]

Page 23 still has it. Also there's a repeated page where you kept the old one shortly after that. I guess it's fine though.

 

[Zohaib_OPM]

Yandere Tendency revealed

 

[Genzerum]

"Here is cleaner version"
Page 22 and 23 are doubled and 23 is a mess
Page 25 and 26 are doubled and 26 is a mess

 

[TheKawaii]

How do you have decent typesetting, but zero proof reading?

 

[itgf]

yea i cant read this dawg

 

[bakanisan]

Hey mate thanks for the TL. I just hope you don't rush your releases haha.

 

[Nopan-san]

Sudden Indonesian marika

 

[blablablub]

Page 16 still has some indonesian(?) text.
Are pages 20 & 21 in the right order? They seem flipped to me.

 

[jubuttib]

Aku juga ingin ikut membantu to you too!

Thanks for the translation anyway, but maybe needs a bit more proofreading. =)

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[essensue]

How do you have decent typesetting, but zero proof reading?

Non-native speakers doin' their best?

 

[MiguelH224]

Translation is all over the place


Now the chapter itself: Kanata's stupidity pisses me off, STOP FOCUSING ON THE FUCKING BAR AND FOCUS ON WHATS IN FRONT OF YOU, YOU BRAINDEAD TWAT

 

[Schernobyl]

Yes this definitely needs a second run with a native English speaking proofreader.

Thanks for the translation @invaliduserlolidkbruh.

 

[MiguelH224]

Translation is all over the place


Now the chapter itself: Kanata's stupidity pisses me off, STOP FOCUSING ON THE FUCKING BAR AND FOCUS ON WHAT'S IN FRONT OF YOU, YOU BRAINDEAD TWAT

 

[Darkshade13]

I appreciate the translation, but this is a really rough read.

You need to have a proofreader that is fluent in English, if not an outright native speaker, because there are a lot of funky things going on with phrasing and sentence structure throughout the chapter.

Translation is all over the place


Now the chapter itself: Kanata's stupidity pisses me off, STOP FOCUSING ON THE FUCKING BAR AND FOCUS ON WHATS IN FRONT OF YOU, YOU BRAINDEAD TWAT

Remember: he can see those affection status bars. The fact that Marika's is broken and seeping toxic looking purple sludge out the bottom scares him because he has no idea what that means and believes it might even mean that she secretly hates him (in spite of how cheerful and friendly she is to him outwardly.)

 

[Dingo777]

Look all I’m saying is one man’s “Obsessive” is another man’s “Devoted”. Marry that psycho pronto my guy. “Oh her love is heavy~“ good, crush me.

 

[DJKatsu]

Your love is not enough to outrun Marika's over-the-chandrasekhar-limit love, Nee-san. Resign to your fate of being reduced to mere additional mass to Marika's singular heart for the MC.

 

[Galder]

at least you can understand what's going on, so thanks for the translation attempt.

 

[Shaggyrand]

Thanks for the TL. I appreciate the work but, bro-ccoli, please find an English-language proof reader.