Marriage Gray - Vol. 1 Ch. 8 - Orange Hope

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thanks for picking this up
good luck translator, because this manga has a lot of text and subtext
(I just reread the previous chapters because I don't remember anything, good thing there are just 8 chapters)



btw, if you mean "though stuff" in the credits refer to the bottom bubble on page 4 with "a receipt" in it ,
basically he said something along the lines of "balance with the ingredients she have bought",
so I think the better translation would be something like "maybe she needs to use up/finish the (leftover) ingredients that have already been bought"
 
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Thanks for picking it up. But I have some suggestions.

Get a non-ESL proofreader, someone who's a native english speaker post on r/manga or r/scanlation on reddit or on the scanlation forum on here. Or use chatgpt to check your grammar.

Upscale the pages and reduce noise, use waifu2x (select all images in the folder). Or any other upscaler and noise reduction software. Please use different fonts https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html. And keep the text inside the boxes/bubbles, try to clean and redraw instead of just adding white boxes. The guide I included has more resources on how to typeset. Find a CL/RD if you cant do it yourself on the same places I mentioned above. Remember to upscale raws before cleaning and typesetting.

And if you see double page spreads please combine them so it's one page, as per upload guidelines.
 
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if you're not redrawing on some of the text, you can simply write on top of it, using a stroke border to make it readable;
as josh47372 pointed out: get a proof reader if you can

thanks for picking it up
 
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Never thought this would get picked up thanks for the translation and goodluck 🙏🏽
 
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Thanks for the chapter, I totally forgot about this one. A breath of fresh air from all the really dark manga i’ve been reading recently.
 
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Change font, center alignment, and it would be passable. Never use left align texts.
 
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Well I can see why the previous translator dropped this, by jove. Out of place "Special lesson" joke is out of place.

Also can't stand how the wife's whole life revolves around her husband in every chapter, granted that's been the case for longer.
 
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Well I can see why the previous translator dropped this, by jove. Out of place "Special lesson" joke is out of place.

Also can't stand how the wife's whole life revolves around her husband in every chapter, granted that's been the case for longer.
It's sad that all she could ever think of is him but all he could ever think of is why did they get married to the point that he doubts every move his wife makes. I get that the premise of the manga is that he's insecure and thinks that her wife is wasted on him but he's so pathetic and untrusting that I wish they break up instead.
 
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i'd love some homemade/custom gyoza, too lazy to do it myself but i'd want a ver with more meat and no onions haha
 

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Pansy husband can't stop obsessing over her cheating on him every second or third chapter. The next time this shit happens I drop it.
 
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lol the 365/diff meal a day seems like it'd be a YT compilation from a cooking channel
 

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